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i dont know... i had it loading and i was thinking about what you wrote... if this is an update thats one thing but it seems its your whole life, and really i didnt stick around long enough to wait and see it... my crit to you is sans your work, it will be about what i didnt see and why...
its nice to show and tell..
that said, perhaps make a new page with all your new work, something to acquire the attention of the user. with this, if it were there, i may have stayed, long enough to even see your work. but that wasnt the case and i bounced.the internet is so big, who are you??? its not like every user in the universe knows you and your work, your update needs a massive update... the white background and words splashed seemded to tell a little story but didnt hold my attention.. i think that is what i am really saying... try to grab the visitors attention firstand hard and fast, because your site takes a long ass time to load i really didnt see anything i dont see in the black and whites of any newspaper...
grab our attentions!!!! and make the site run faster!!!
maybe next time ill actually see your work.
good luck!! and take this crit with confidence and re-make it to work!!
:)