Crit my site WIP please...

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    first of all - very well done for creating a nice flash WP site !

    the design of the content displayed in the blog is nice.
    the only parts i dont like are the animated typography at the top - its a nice idea but the typography isnt "tight" enough.
    also the main top level buttons are a bit poor in terms of typography too, the white animated/rollover states is a bit "lacking".

    Get some good classic typography books and look at the layouts/design. i like what youve done - its a lot like a "printed page" kind of layout.
    With really tight typography your site could be amazing!!!!

    On another note, i like the colours youve used, have you thought of using slightly distressed fonts like letterpress fonts for the top animation and section titles etc?
    i think this could look really awesome done like that but with crisp body text and the whole background being a slight paper-texture.
    i'd sex a website that looked like that.

    lol

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