First in a Series of New Sites
First in a Series of New Sites
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- detritus0
Needs more **SHAZAM!**. On boot-up it looks a bit like one of those auto-generated domain filling sites - especially the quartered bullet points in the nav.
What does that video section in the bottom left do, other than look bleak and a little worrying?
Your header image is awful. Truly awful.
You make use of some good widgetry - the slideshow on the homepage and the Contact section, for instance - but overall, it doesn't gel at all. Although I quite like the overall page structure, it feels like it's been put together by a techie without any design nous.
If you want to get a positive reception when asking for a crit, it helps if you don't react like a child if someone's a bit scathing - otherwise you'll just put the rest of us off you.
- oh, you didn't ask for a crit - just for us to 'check it out'. Well, I did. So there you go.detritus