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Out of context: Reply #18

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  • Fariska0

    Not bad, but there are some issues
    - Embed some font and lose that times new roman loading progress: looks cheap
    - Lose the popup
    - On the print section is a shame having such big canvas and such small pictures. Make them bigger
    - On the Graphic design section it bothers me that you have a tilted scrapbook where you show perfectly horizontal logos.
    - Personally i don't dislike the interactive section to be displayed thru a monitor, but the portfolio links are quite invisible, lost on that blob of text which is that page.
    Work on hierarchy, lose a lot of that text (this applies also for the other sections) and make it visually appealing as the rest of the site.

    Anyway you're almost there.

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