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  • detritus0

    When you put the words together like that, without any case hints, I read it frenchie stylee - cubenoise, au 'coob-nwaseh'

    I get the cube in three of the forms - but whither noise? All seems little obvious and unthought out. The one where you have ..wait for it.. thought outside the box, with the circular arrow forms, doesn't make any sense - I mean, it's good that you've tried to go away from the box - but circles are like anti-boxes - just too far from expectation.

    My impression is that you've not sat down for a few hours with a pad and paper and sketched out concepts and ideas first, instead, just jumping straight into illustrator and going with the obvious.

    • thanks, very good points (all valid and pretty much on point) I did sketch some but not nearly enough.rodzilla

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