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  Its hard to see it 'purely' with the afformentioned jpg compression but if I knock my eyes out of focus a tad it looks nicer. I do like the lettering, but I don't like the tonal variations in the lettering becuase it looks a bit 'stainy' and a bit 'soaked' and a bit heavy in the dark zones...generally not as elegant and light on its feet as I would expect this logo to be.

  I would do a nice clean curved vector trace off and stick to a flat colour, and I think the actual letteform and type arrangement is really nice.

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  • yup, vectorise it / modify it into something stronger and more mark-likekelpie
  • "soaked" is right on.mrseaves
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