site critiques welcome
site critiques welcome
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- detritus0
I think, for a start, you should bulk it out with some more realistic placeholders - get some more imagery in there, so it looks more 'live'. At the moment it looks like an initial fleshing-out and I think you need to spend a lot more time honing the detail and bringing the elements together. To be honest, as it is, it's quite dull - the grey and peach combo is a bit flaccid and there's not a lot of cohesion.