site crit please

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  • kona0

    real nice progression leftwave. i like the direction. pay attention to your spacing though. the amount of pixels "welcome ot nao..." is off the left edge of your left picture, should be the same amount of pixels from the left "what's new" is off it's picture. i really like what you've done with their phone number. have you tried pulling the 'learn more' and 'news archive' to the left under the text? they look a little lost and disjointed down there like they're not a part of anything. very nicely done.

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