site crit please
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- thismanslife0
I agree with an earlier remark about the body text stretching too wide, maybe try keeping it the width of the larger image, over too the left, leave space to the right, or maybe put the "call today" text in that area. Either way, I do think the line-length is too much (think about how many words you're using per line - what you have there is a bit of a typo-no-no).
Also I'd perhaps raise the logo up slightly off the bar, give it more space ie. give it more visual weight/importance in the page - it's a pretty healthy size, which gives it weight, but feel like it needs a tiny bit more breathing space - try leaving a gap beneath it of about the same height as a lowercase character from the logo.
Also agree that the nav text is a little too large, and, maybe worsened by the use of all caps.