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  • fyoucher10

    Stellar work, killer reel. Why the pop-up? Why not just load this badboy right into the first page? That rollover sound is pretty annoying. I like the design of it but for some reason it feels cramped to me though. Your lowercase 'e''s for the pixel font is getting jacked up in a lot of places. I would optimize ur work images less, some of them look pretty pixelated. You may want to run another spell & grammar check, I found an extra space in the About section right b4 "Whether" and some run-ons in other sections. Again, really really nice work.

    Oh wait, I just noticed u said this was an old site. Well, there you go.

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