University Magazine Designs..

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    what size?

    - issue/price etc (far too close to edge)
    - logo is really ambiguous and awkwardly kerned.
    - (on the middle one) logo is far too big (its ift not the front cover - try to keep branding to a minimum)
    - could help to give more of an idea of whats in it? (unless the idea is NOT to do it - then you need to explain the purpose/concept of the mag)
    - logo far too close to edge
    - not really able to come to a full crit out of half a spread and two covers..
    show more - grid system/(or lack of) - contents page - how to photos work in articles (are they always full bleed?)
    - the leading is a bit loose on the middle page text..

    etc etc

    (also try to use your own images... - esp for university projects (as it gives you brownie points for extra creative abilities- rather than "i can google scarlett johansson")

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