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Out of context: Reply #5
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- Ampersanderson0
since you're asking about design content, here are my thoughts. get rid of the following, not 'cause they're bad, but because it will further highlight all the other work. I really think you've got some good stuff in there.
Omit: 8, 10, 14, 20, 35, 37, 38, 50, 52, 58, 60, 63, 67, 73, 75, 84.