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  • dusty_shackle0

    Scene: 7

    *The room is dimmed with flickering florescent light. The neon light sign outside the fire escape flickers along. A woman with a cigarette laying on the bed gently blows her exhaled cigarette. As she inhales, the glowing amber of the cigarette cheery lights her face. Than the door bursts open with a dark shade of a man.

    Enter Kona

    Kona: How now brown cow

    Woman: You are late

    *Kona walks toward the bed

    Woman: Do you get the cash?

    *Kona throws the cash on her belly

    Kona: Here, this is what I have collected

    *Woman does not flinch as the rolled up bills hit her

    Woman: That seem a little more than what I asked for

    Kona: They were carrying more than I expected

    *Woman inhales her cigarette and talks as she exhales

    Woman: You should of left them as they were

    *Kona turns his back toward the woman

    Kona: He didnt need it where he was going

    to be continued
    MrD
    (Oct 15 07, 10:04)

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