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Out of context: Reply #7

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  • Nairn0

    NT doesn't like IP number URLs (URIs?), here's your page..

    http://tinyurl.com/22gh75

    Your site's a bit too spartan and the name rubs me up the wrong way. You should look at your second tier nav - in fact, nav overall is flimsy - your javascript is interfering with my mouse pointer - I don't know that half the things on there are links, especially as you've removed any underlines or hints.

    Consistency and sepll ckeching - is it Projects or Portfolio? It's not Hienz.

    Clients page doesn't do anything?

    I'd have your project details up front - or at least, see nav point above.

    I'm struggling to see the logic in splitting out Portfolio, Clients and News - are you trying to look bigger than you really are? It's not too intuitive and will ultimately require more admining - now that they're there, they need to be used and kept fresh - do you really have 4 new news stories each week or so? If you do - do you have the time to edit copy and upload?

    Your work is pretty decent and some of the site's details are professional - landing page graphic, for instance. I just don't like the weak web2.0 bevelled edges, consumer mint colouring and drop shadow.. I suspect you can do better.

    Good luck!

    (sorry if this all sounds harsh - it's well meant. I'm hungover, have just thrown up and am in dire need of tea)

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