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Ok big-papes, Ive just gotten help from people on a site Im workin on so Im gonna offer some constructive criticism, hope its not too harsh.
First of all, I like the work, especially the decks, very cool colours in there. And some nice type.
While I like the logo and colours, I think the nav is a bit too big and you're losing a lot of space up top.
Im not diggin the bgs I think the gray dots on the white need to be faded back and the same on the diagonal desk logo on the orange, I love the bright colour but it could be more subtle.
Im not enthusiastic about the popups, you've got a lot of space on the page so either utilise that or bring the viewer to a new page.
I like the work, some of it is very si scott, which isnt a bad thing, but you could preview it better. Small thumbnails would work better than the rectangles I think.
Lose the illos of the hoodies or t-shirts or just refine the images, they're a little clunky.
And Id re-take the last couple of photographs, think about what the person holding the pics is wearing, cos its clashing with the work so either more neutral clothing colours or pin them to the wall and take em.
I know this seems like a lot to take in and feel free to disregard any of what Ive said, but you want to show your work as best you can.