site crit please
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- letters20
Descent format, nice clean presentation overall. A few points to consider:
- I agree that there are a lot of clicks involved to enter into the work section, but perhaps this is unavoidable with the breakdown of the work/structure.
- The secondary navigation that opens to show thumbnails and info... Its motion is slow and a bit ragged. If its animated, script it. If its scripted, cange the variable to be a bit faster.
- Also, this navigation seems an afterthought, wondering why it wasnt integrated into the main nav bar?
- the Info icon seems out of place.
- Typography. Personally, I find this typographic choice Futura inappropriate – but this is rather subjective. Something more contemporary would be better suited I feel.
- Where you are using an all-caps setting, open up the kerning (not unlike "MOA ARCHITECTURE on the left) to let some space in there which will help the legibility.
2 cents