site crit please

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  • madirish0

    nice work. i like the format, but
    (common crit of mine) would like the 'stage' area larger/taller. feels a little tight, IMO.

    - there are kind of a lot of clicks req'd to actually see the work. might be nice to prompt user earlier w/ visuals to then cause exploration of that area/focus. those could be randomly displayed when user selects 'gallery' or something.

    - the central nav is a little distracting at first, but i do appreciate it after i am finally into the work.

    - would be nice if the text was dynamically pulled so i could bump size w/ browser pref's- could be an issue (coupled w/ the light stroked Futura used) for poor-eyesight peeps (ie- decision makers/check-writers)

    - might sound silly, but i really like the way you integrated the brand mark into photo transitions to keep the user prompted who is responcible for the work- nice finishing touch.

    nicely done. i am sure the client is pleased.

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