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I best pull up my socks and clean up my own backyard if I am to consider myself my brothers keeper...
I was on board with the existentialist musings, but this new rage against the machine album seems a tad trite... the production seems forced and the visual identity poorly executed..
Not that it's necessary, but there isn't a clear concept to be found anywhere. Overall it lacks any sort of focus, maybe it's too balanced or just seems to state the obvious without offering an answer or even a straw to grasp?
The cropping is too tight, pull back some and make more effective use of the whitespace. Focus on the passive and make it active.. Find some rest in the tension, and get rid of those lines, the structure is strong enough on it's own for the eye to follow the rhythm more logically and lead to greater legibility...
If you can strip it back to the singular and iconic reference then you will strike a chord with the masses, breaking down the cultural barriers that may cause you to miss the mark completely...
Know more, no less..