webpage crit
webpage crit
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have you considered using a bit more text to surmise the product on offer before the 3 main selling shouts?
Nairn
(Apr 20 07, 09:49)very gd point.. after looking at the aesthetics i realised i had absolutely no idea as to what the whole business did...
is it a dog callcenter targeted at women and girls?
or dog friendly mobile phones...
the paragraph describing it is greatly overshadows by the dog and the offers.. it has no emphasis...
think about hierarchy