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    "ugh vomit"??

    im missing the connection with aids

    + defton stylus & impact (nononono)

    its really flashy (in a computer arts tutorial kinda way) - im sure u could totally refrain frm any of the insane visual effects and still come out with a really strong msg

    i think its always a temptation to use EVERY trick in the bag on every piece of work u do - but u dont need (hand sketches+light beams, paint splatters, + emo photo + distressed type + fat outlines) after a while it become as a mess of effects

    pick a 'trick' that is connected with the outcome (ie a light beam = a lifeline) and make THAT the focus.. Otherwise u will make the reader a bit nauseous ;)

    asides from form over function comments - pretty intense

    bit emo :)

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