Bcard Redesign part 2 (the real one)
Bcard Redesign part 2 (the real one)
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- kelpie0
I think it still needs some typographic work, but I also think your copy could be better - it doesn't seem to flow very well, try reading it out loud, the first line is uncomfortable. I'd also remove "you could" from the contact details...