Site Crit Please

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  • k0na_an0k0

    Not a bad layout/grid.

    I'd lose one of the 45 degree angled lines though. One set goes one way the other in the opposite direction. It's really throwing off my eye. If anything I'd keep it on the background and lose it in the main windows. Maybe use a graident instead, or, a darker gray for a bit more contrast.

    I'd actually make the plane image larger and take up that whole space, instead of having a border like that.

    You can also lighten the Address/Copyright line a bit. Use a medium gray. It's important but not that important. Give it a bit of space from the lower nav too.

    Nice start.

    The inside page seems a bit boring. Try incorporating a pic back in someplace to give some color to the page. Right now it's only red and black and there is nothing really popping out at me where to start on the page.

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