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- Nairn0
*stabs pop-ups in eyes.
i like the bold use of colour in your sections - very nice. it even distracts me from your having the navigation after your content, which I think awkward.
your typography is dire though (coming from someone equally non-typo-anal :) - I'd get rid of your pixel text url and 'navigation' - they look awful and are redundant.
your main text would benefit from a lighter weight and a larger size - i'd also consider lighter/non-existant link underlining.
your spinning box logo jars - it's only half a box - what's that all about?
it'd be nice if you set the bgcolor of each frame away from white and as close to the background image colour as possible - having it flash white before loading is a bit crappy.
For the next iteration of your site, i hope you get a handle on CSS - your site is simple and clean enough to benefit from this, so make use of it.
Good work, man!
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