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  • HelixDnB0

    You need to group like-sized elements together instead of it going something like:

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    Get what I'm saying?

    Work on more of a grid-structure to it. For instance, having the Manyana Beach design report right under the Ryde Residential design report. This way it can be like:
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    It'll look a lot cleaner and more professional that way, You have the grid structure down in yor print pieces, so why not reflect the same in your web portfolio?

    Pride and Lust can go next to the Art is the triumph/the world to... pieces, which can go next to the amex signage (vertically aligned).

    Also like others have said, a clickable link to larger versions of the images may be a good idea as well.

    Hope that helps.

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