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- Nairn0
I like it, generally.
Some thoughts you might wish to consider..
- intro copy isn't beautiful, at all - low size bold arial looks duff, imo and it definitely jars with the graphic text you use on the right hand side. I'd consider trying html text on right side.
- as it's horizontal scrolling, it'd be nice if it all sat well, vertically in my screen. looks a bit odd, having a gulf of space at the bottom, but not at the top.
- i'd expect to be able to click on work sections and be taken to a new page, iwth bigger graphics and a project breakdwon.
-i'd consider intra-page navigation - have a list within the intro text that can be clicked and will scroll you directly to that section on the right.
Good luck!