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Out of context: Reply #14

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  • Nairn0

    Personally, I like the direction of #2 / #3 (monotone rather than yellow/orange though) but I can imagine Joe Public responding better to #1.

    With that, as others have said, you should integrate the photo 'better' (darken background/include strip?) and play with the lines - they don't need to emanate from the baton (that's almost trite), but they do work well, imo. Most importantly, I think people will 'get it' rather than the score-like aspects of 2, 3.

    I like 4 - I just don't see the relevance to the subject.

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