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  • Nairn0

    you want... a crit... of a holding page.. for a site we haven't seen?

    wha?

    anyway - get rid of crappy strapline & contact boxes and re-consider your colour shades.

    the outline on your hiveminds text should probably go and you should spend a wee bit more time tweaking your leaf overlays - they don't feel natural. what;s that griddy thing supposed to be? why have you stroked the outer lines with a brush?

    if I were you, i'd make it look good in grayscale then start faffing with the colours - you've got about 3 families of green living in there and not co-existing as they could.

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