logo crit - part deux
logo crit - part deux
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this is the first time i saw this logo (missed the previous post), but i'm not feeling it's quite there yet. i like the concept, but the negative shapes (especially in the word design) are not settling well with me. there's a lot of space to the left of the 's' and under the 'n,' but it's tight everywhere else. not sure how to remedy it, but i thought i'd throw that out.
the other thing is the 'j' and the 'o' in mojo. my eye wraps around the last 'o' and reads the 'j' as an 'i.' i figured it out, but looking at it the first time, i was confused for a second... then again, a lot of things tend to confuse me ;)