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    Looks pretty good.

    the composition is a bit bland, perhaps you could capitalize on the white space a bit better, emphasize that assymmetry more.

    also, the type is soft (as it is an image), perhaps using a bitmap face.

    The "Less" and "More" buttons have the same vernacular as the type to the left, which is not selectable. Perhaps there could be a distincion, something that directs to less and more, letting you know that its accessible. Something to differentiate it from the type on the left.

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