Crit my site
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Hey Wayne, i apoligize for other assholes on here, as this is a portal site to get HELPFUL criticism of ones work. (waiting for the barrage to follow!) With that said, I think you are off to a good start here...Although some of the work is pretty decent, the lack of navigation is a little troublesome to me...Even though you have a short list of works, I still could not point a friend (client/employer/etc) to a particular piece of work without saying, "umm, scroll down like, i dunno 20 inches or so.." You get what I'm saying...I would also remove the pic of you on the site, its not necessary, and you are showcasing a graphic portfolio, not a modeling photography one....If you had a section devoted to (professional) modeling, that would be different. Right now it just looks like a stock image (I have no idea what you look like). Also, if you don't have a link for a site, just remove it, don't say "No URL yet." This is just exposing a weakness to you and your site. One last little picky thing, your logo is pretty nice, except the TM is huge, maybe shrink it down? I hope i was of some help to you, please don't hesitate to ask anything else....
Cheers
PS - Consider changing or de-bolding the font on your resume, it looks like it was made in word and powerpoint...Try the type from your site, its nicer...