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    also, perhaps some greate contrast in scale could aid your compositions. As it stands now, the large type and small type used have a similar stroke proportion, rather wide. As well, the frames for the sections have a wide width to their structure, even the "bullets" are wide. things to me seem large (not a lot of active space here), perhaps some smaller type to contrast, or a bit more assymetry to contrast the "full" layout

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