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  • k0na_an0k0

    nice one page layout. i'd re-work your intro text a bit. reads like this. choppy. short sentances. needs to flow from one sentance to another and read better.

    also. you really don't need the 'tools' stuff at all. it's not really important anymore. if you want to tell people you know the latest in cs2 or whatever dump that into your resume in your skills section. it's really not needed on the site.

    as a whole i really like it. nicely done.

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