Site Critique
Site Critique
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- stewart0
i like some parts of the website: the animated fishes.
what's not working for me is the navigation. the png-buttons (leaves) disappear when i scroll the page, also the mermaid.
when i scroll the page and click a button so i can read a bunch of text, sometimes i have to scroll again to read the text because it's hided by the bottom of the page.
another thing is that i see difference in illustration styles.
fishes are photographic, the little animations are in a different style, and also there's the mermaid drawed in another style. i think you need just 1 style or a strong combination of styles.personally i also think that the story isn't strong. polluting the sea by dropping a plastic bag in a sewer?