site crit
site crit
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needs some more effort.
things are a bit heavy, and outdated. Seems like this was a site done in 2001-2002.
I think you really need to finesse this more, drop shadows are harsh, the filled in Os seem like a throw back, the torn paper, when done right can work well, but its coming off as a bit amateurish. Its like you are trying to combine swiss design with bad snowboarding inspired design.
I think over all the big face is killing the design. Take that off and already its improving things. Keep at it.