Crit my site? Thanks!!!
Crit my site? Thanks!!!
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- JerseyRaindog0
Pretty slick, but a helluva lot of spelling mistakes... I would get it proofread.
Also, and this is purely personal, i wonder if the copy is a little too conversational in tone. I would try an dmake it more businesslike.