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looks good.. Great work.. I could do without the Dance invitation/Pink couple dancing.. its small, cant read the type unless I get really close, its just weak.. Maybe add a larger pic for the Design and the Play Instinct.? cant really make out what Im supposed to be reading, looking at... although I like how you are presenting it to the viewer.
The Grey jacket for Sometimes Y should maybe be in Reverse order, Front then back, not back then front, if that is what im seeing.
I think over all you can probably punch up some of your larger pics. Just a tinge brighter, but that may be my monitor...