Brochure crit

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  • Dancer0

    Hmm toughie.

    Could you have fold out pages so you fit more than 2 or 3 words to a line, then introduce a grpahic element as a visual pull to "introduce would be some keylines to help further the clarity in the page layout."

    the main part of your layout is considered and puts emphasis on the content and how is is easily understood, it's just the pages of overly large type that hit me.

    Could you knock the text back to a 5% tint and work on it on more of a grphic level...?

    I dunno, I will have a think

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