Brochure crit

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  • Dancer0

    for me I think it may be a little over designed. I think you need more white space and the large bold text that has it's own page is a bit too much for me.

    Don't get me wrong it DOES look good just need a better balance, and a few tweeks.
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    What kelpie said about pushing the brand in the right direction.

    It's such a shame that you have to design it in both Languages, do you have to do that alot?

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