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- mr_snuggles0
top left with some further refinement. The type needs some work and the spacing within your elements need a bit more consistency. You also lose the rounded 'openings' on the 2 open capsules, which you might want to explore. ie - either lose it on the closed capsule, or bring it back to the other 2. right now
you're playing with 2 visual languages..the type is too small with the other ones.