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Out of context: Reply #22
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maybe get an aerial land map of that hawaiian landmark and bust it up with a couple of planes of colour/shape but the buildings and the mountain aren't working together at all as they are. the perspective/style on the buildings is really throwing the whole thing off imo.
the elements aren't unifying the mark.
no.6 is a far more professional and interesting take.