Poster Critique
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if walking on the street would catch my eye. but am not sure if I would stop and read. How were you planning on this being used? printed to be posted on the street/ inside store or emailed to people/ just posted online? I think the type scale and size would vary depending on where it would be placed.
Also I am not seeing much of a type hierarchy. Yes the title is the largest and type is sub-pt sizes below, but What is it you want me to read next, after the "MusicVideoShow?" because my eye begins to wander after this and I end up being taken away from the poster- mainly because the monkey is looking to the right and many of the lines are directing me to the right.. that I look at the title an just keep moving right..
I am being a lil picky.. but looks like you are following a grid and lining things up/ and your "2006" and the "sprockets.filmathens.net" don't line up..
with the monkey I am not sure if you need many of them, but maybe you could play with scale, he does seem to be a lil over powered in terms of composition right now.
great start/ want to see where you take it
inspire