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Out of context: Reply #17
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- asprin0
"the copy to the right of the items, describing them could flow a little better. but other than that, I like it a lot!"
Yeah, I wish the descriptions were more sentence structure like but this is the way they were presented to me. I think the woman is into poetry and wanted the descritions to be in that style.