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Easily the worst bit of work you have put up for a crit. Is this the work of your intern again?
It just doesn't have anything holding it togethor. Half clean lines, half crafty, no clear direction.
I'd head in the direction of crafty, tape borders on the photos, more hand written elements and fill the page a bit more.