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  • kbags0

    i think it's nice. but you can make this so much better by taking a step back. thoughts...

    not very readable, the spacing and the distressing are really throwing things off for you. see how much of an effect the rotation has? Play with it.

    the emphasis on landing as opposed to New Moon?

    that fish is not sending me the right signal. kinda looks like the christianity fish, too.

    i am not an art director. but i did stay at a holiday inn express. =)

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