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  • spendogg0

    It looks like you have 3 colors not 2. the overlap + transparency is a bit hard to read.

    where your transparencies overlap you are creating tangents with the tip and tail of the two S's which is effecting the readability - give it some room to breathe.

    I like the action in the R but it is reading more like a spark plug than a satellite.

    If you are super hype about the transparency thing have it mutiply into the R as well.

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