Business Card Crit

Out of context: Reply #43

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  • jpolk0

    it's pretty much all been said, but here goes/

    type issues:
    need some space between your name & art and design.

    i agree with the comments about centered type and all caps url.

    also the "rw" letter pairing looks a little too tight. maybe kern it out a tad bit. maybe "or" as well. same goes for the "esi" in design.

    as far as general stuff goes, maybe a more "ornamental" rule below the "logo" and contact info.

    also, have you tried having the mark on the contact size being a reverse of the knocked out one on the front (#5); i.e. same size, placement? might work out nicely.

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