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Out of context: Reply #19

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  • stewart0

    left top (nr 1)

    and this is why:

    my eyes first scan "louis" and after that "walch".
    in a rescan i read "louis" again PLUS "daniel".
    when i'm finished scanning "daniel" my eye is already on the position of the first line of your address.
    and the whole shape is -sort of- in balance. it's not extremily leaning over to the left or right, you see?

    but i don't like the uppercase name... in lowercase you can add the ë in Daniël, which makes it more clear.

    the light version of the font in the word Daniel is better in #1. the thin set words in the rest of the cards are way too light.

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