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    I like the typographic qualities of the word 'life' in A (minus the swooshes). Using different font sizes and weights would add to a more 'hectic' feel and compliment the name. I'd shy away from joining the words 'of' and 'the'.
    Have the words read as they appear in C.

    The martini glass in B is well rendered and I'd use that as an accompanying mark. Maybe at a larger size (with overlap) positioned by the 'L' of 'Life'.

    You could also introduce two-three more colours but that would depend on how it's going to get used.

    Overal, take elements from each variation and you got a winner.

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