business card crit

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    mango, I'd think maybe about switching up the typeface on your name. Put it in something more basic or darker. Even arial is fine. You don't want to overdesign it. Simple is better in my book. I know you're big into all kinds of intricate sh*t.

    It's a good design, but somehow the three colors together don't do it for me. Maybe take out the powder blue and go with a greenish-blue and red.

    I'll ring you later. Nice work at any rate! :)

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