alright, it's done now.
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Under: What's the Point?
"alot" should be two wordsUnder: Dirt on your...
That is one helluva run-on sentence. DOn't get too friendly with the commas, they think it means you like them more than friends. Try something like:
These are the designs and featured colors on the t-shirts that were released at the same time as the album. We sold them out. I'm trying to round up a few people who bought a shirt so that i can get a photo with all three colors showing.Under: Rejected
you need a period after "graffitti", which, by the way, shouldn't it have one "t" or did i get decaf again?Under: Baby new year
Space after "(2004)" please.Under: For lack of...
make any comma into a period. if you feel that makes "it was mainly for my girlfriend. She needed something ..." change it to "It was mainly for my girlfriend who needed something..."Under: ABout me
The sentence in the parentheses should be inside the period of the preceding sentence.Period after "age of 16"
take out comma after "new" computers in the second paragraph and then put that next set of parenbtheses inside the preceding period.last paragraph, please change the first comma into a period.
Sorry if this is nit-picky. I'm a geek.